All Comments on 'Best Present Ever: Cheerleader Orgy'

Not hard for me to have an orgasm reading your stories J. !

Join the world general population its just an "ass" not "arse" and it will read easier and better.

perhaps you need your "world population" to be better educated. To us "yanks" ( US Citzens) it is an ass, to the rest of the world it is actually an arse. as to the Author? Please keep this going, it is well written. keep up the great work.

Excellent story. Incidentally, it is entirely appropriate for a British girl to say "arse" - that is still the standard word in England where the English language came from (the clue's in the name) and only an ignorant cretin would object.

While I will agree that it reads easier for us with "ass", it's more appropriate in England to use "arse" However, to point out that Beth has a sexy British accent makes it sound like the rest of the characters are not from England, but then you call it "Boxing Day" which means they are, so that's rather confusing.

But what really confused me was the fact that you changed the main character's name twice in this story. In the previous part he was Matthew, then at one point someone called him Jeremy and then at the end you changed it to Curtis. Either you copy and pasted someone else's work or you inserted the names from one of your other stories because you weren't paying attention.

I apologize in advance for a major flaw in this story and a minor one:

The main character should be Mathew, but in my sloppiness while writing a couple stories at once I mixed up names. A very sloppy error that I should have caught. (A proper version has been submitted and will be updated in 2-3 days I hope).

Secondly, I am Canadian and just assumed that America had Boxing Day too. All the characters are American, except Beth who is obviously British (thus the use of arse when she speaks...which I personally think sounds nastier for some reason).

Again, I hope u can still enjoy the story even with the silly mistakes.

Jasmine

Fun story. Friends and relatives can have good times like this

Love this story! I did notice the name changes but it didn't bother me too much. Not a big fan of the word arse, but in its context with the British character Beth's dialog, understandable. This is a total jerk off story and though I couldn't do it(others in the room) I did get painfully hard!

Keep this going!

Keep it cumming, cunt struck fucker UK

This is definitely HOT!!

I look forward to the next chapter.

Hot story though not as hot as the 1st

i hope to read soon the next chapter,maybe even one with their mom involved.thx.

keep it this up great storyline and look forward to Milf chapter

Another great episode, Jasmine. Plenty of hot sex with occasional kinks!

Look forward to the MILF chapter.

Thanks for writing such horny stories.

Keep the brother's name the same

Sex between siblings is far more common than most people realise. My sister, with whom I have been having regular fucks for over 20 years, claims to know over a dozen other women who have fucked with their brother. My sister has also been fucked by another brother and a cousin.

Your stories seem so intense, I almost need a rest after reading them. Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter.5+++

Great story can not wait for more

That was incredible! So dirty, nasty & delicious!! Well done! Looking forward to more of your stories!!!

Great story , i loved it , but u changed the name twice in this story & its not the same as the first part too

it kinda breaks off the continuity thinking who the hell is this ..ah he is that guy .. & stuff like this

but all in all its very good ... keep it up

witing for the science lab partener story :)

Not quite as intense/good as the first chapter but quite enjoyable none the less. Am looking forward to the Mrs. Raske conquest. Story could be continued with Allison and his mother also being brought into the fold.

First one was so much better with the teasing and such~

This one is too direct & giving orders.

I prefer the first one.

I hope there's more to follow. Nicely done

Another great story! Please keep this serious going.

not found a read like this for a long time please make some more

Another great story!! Please continue this series!!

but where's the teacher???? We need a teacher getting involved!!!

--J

love the story.

love how the power shift. i can see the two girls having to lick della's chubby hot sexy ass. forced to do all the nasty things she can think of. making them lick her dripping wet pussy after she takes a piss all over there cute faces and bodies. making them thank her and say she is superior to them. making them take compromising pictures to keep in her personal files to keep the power shift were it belongs. forcing them to seductively give her power over there lives forever. mmmm so much going on in my kinky mind. i love the things you silkstockings have put into my kinky mind. thanks keep up the good work my sexy slut school teacher. your a true kinky hot slut that i want to dominate. the kinky hot nasty things i could do to you with my hard black cock.

Please keep it up. Thanks

Thank you! Keep it up.

GREAT STORY. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Simply put....incredibly fucking hot!!!! I can't wait to meet Mrs Raske and Allison!!!

Enjoyed both chapters. Hope you manage to keep it all in style further on and not fall for the temptation to take short cuts and head turn the story in other directions. A lot of stories here has gone bad because of that. I would advice you not to put too many people in it, as a lot of other stories drowns you in character descriptions and you can't remember half of it. The one's mentioned for further plots seem to give you enough to work with. I'm a sucker for love stories, so a happy ending for the protagonist with Allison in the end would secure this series as a success for me at least. :) As for rivals or obstacles I'm not sure that would be needed here, but if, I would say that nearly always less is more. And one thing in particular. Several stories have added other active males in later chapters to keep things interesting. I hated every single story that did that. None of the plots or characters were intact after that, and everything seemed forced and out of place.

You have good style and a nice flow to the story. Looking forward to read more.

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John

rly nice, hope it will continue

Your stories at first(such as the what mom does/n't know series) at first has kinda got me into stockings/pantyhose even more than previously and thrust the idea of getting into feet with them on and now with this series and the making mommy mine..... well that has all sorta gotten me into making some girl completely submit to my will :-) although i just hope i don't run into someone whos will is stronger than mine cause well..... i have a very commanding/bossy/wanting personality and well certain types of people can just make me their total slut :-P although really the only people that could make me their total slut are guys cause i sorta grow feminine being with a guy :-) i would also like to mention how when you do think of one of your parents in a certain manner and can't get that image out that your stories do not help get the parent out of my mind! lol! well this site doesn't help....

I will be awaiting the next installment

I will be awaiting the next installment

more i want more and soon please

your work is great can't wait for more of this story

Wow, love your work! This, and Best Present Ever: Bitch Sister are incredibly hot! Would love it if you continued the series. Thanks for writing!

YES!!!!!! This is exactly what I wanted :) All I can say is - you absolutely rock :)

Reading this story makes me think of this guy as a bad as hero. The way he took control left me thinking if this guy was real he would be every guys hero

Please continue this excellent story - I would very much like to read the next chapter.

Please oh please add the next chapter! Please! It's is amazingly well written and so hot.

Outstanding prose! I came twice just picturing the scene.

this is great hes not only banging 2 hot girls hes also raising up the sub and helping her out. good story for many reasons

I truly hope you continue this series. I know its hard to continue rather than start a new one, but this one has so much potential...the nerdy girl, the hot mom, whats to come of the three submissives he can already use? VERY much looking for more of this one!

Really hoping to see it continue

Loved this just as much as your other work. As the others stated looking forward to the next installment.

Where is the MILF Neighbor.

Part 3: Milf neighbor is finally done and will be released in June...

I just loved the two story, I hope i'm not the only one asking you to continue the stories, please!!!!! Congratulations!!!!!

Oh, right, hundreds of millions of people.

This is a small issue, and doesn't really detract from the story, but I mention it because it is at the very beginning and starts the story off on a bad note.

In the first and second paragraphs you talk about the nuclear family getting together on Christmas and opening presents on Christmas Eve. You then make a point of mentioning that it is a family tradition going back over 100 years. Opening presents on Christmas Eve/Day, you say. Wow, shocking. Will there be a turkey on Thanksgiving, fireworks on July 4th, eggs on Easter, pumpkins and costumes on Halloween?

My point is this: Why mention that it is a 100-year-old tradition? What does that add to the story? It seems like you are trying to make something noteworthy out of something that ridiculously pervasive and commonplace and not at all noteworthy.

Hundreds of millions of people open presents at Christmas. Mention it and move on.

Otherwise, fine story.

"...but wanted to saviour this dream..." You can't make this stuff up. I suppose Christians think Christ is their savor.

The nuclear family or elementary family is a term used to define a family group consisting of a pair of adults and their children.

Anonymous:

It's a cultural thing. Just because YOUR family never opened gifts on Christmas eve doesn't mean others don't. In most Latin American countries that is the time they are opened. When I was growing up, all of us kids were allowed to pick one gift our of our Christmas stockings that we could open on Christmas eve and the rest were then saved for the morning. Good compromise in some families. But in a melting pot like America, don't assume everyone has to follow your exact customs.

Fantastic just like I remember it as always Silk you are a great writer

you are my newest favorite author...that was hot hot hot!!!!

Very nicely written, thank you for sharing.

was suppose to find a way (supposed)

mouth watering (mouth-watering)

no one other than me could here (hear)

short lived (short-lived )

goddess' (goddess's)

saviour this dream (savour)

New Year's Party (party)

THANKS ! ! ! !

God i love your stories!!!

And it is goddess' when a word ends with an s you never do a 's.

The comments are trolling the writer and I'm just laughingtoo damn hard... 😂😂😂😂😂

Loved the story, very hot, not sure why but I find it extra hot because it comes from the mind of a woman, is that weird? Lol

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One reason I found this such an interesting story is the way he treated Della. She had been 'put down' all her life because of a weight problem, yet he treated her as a living, breathing human being with feelings and emotions. It made me so glad to see him do that for her. Even if he does nothing else good in this whole series of stories, he will be a hero in my eyes. We witnessed a turning point in her life, something that will be with her forever. He made her realize for the first time in her life, and with only a very few kind words, that she was someone important and was lovable. This shows the power of words, which is something I have known for many years. It is so simple, yet with only a few right words at the right time, you can build someone up to unbelievable heights or rip them to shreds. I have had that experience in my life and have seen what a four simple word said to someone did to their attitude and confidence. All I said was, "You are doing great." I wish more people would read this and take his lesson to heart. Needless to say, this chapter really hit home to me, and I will remember this one for a very long time. THANK YOU!

I got to hand It to you, you can really write a character with power. As opposed to his sister, Matt doesn't just have the power to break down, but to build up. With a few kind words, he turned slave into master. Anyone can put down someone and turn them into their bitch, but real power truly comes from those who can also build that bitch up. Although, when's it comes to sandra's orgasm, it seemed cruel to make her use a cucumber instead of getting laid. The way I would've done it was have Matt ask the girls if she earned it. Then have matt command her to get on all fours so that she can take it from behind while she eats out Della while fingering Beth, who wouldn't be on top of Della while making out with her. A show of power from Matt and her former slaves while still getting the good dick.

Exciting story. Twisted and perverse, I love it.

Story should've stuck to the same timeline as the "first chapter". Threw me right for a loop. Don't give sequel tutorials if you don't know how to write a proper sequel? Alas the stories are free so I shouldn't bitch, but I thought this should be mentioned.

Hi last commenter..

Unfortunately, this was one of my first sequels and I would sure have written it different if I wrote it now.

Jasmine

I don't understand what people have against you miss Jasmine.

The guys was dumb enough to relize that the storyline was on track.

And Goodness freaking out as I never thought that I would end up having a nylon fetish just by reading your stories as well...

This had actually happened to me before my sister tried that domination stuff on me and after reading this the first time I have read the whole series already. Its pretty interesting it actually played out like you wrote even to the neighbor seducing my mom and then I ended up just like the story banging all of them. But this was great don't mind people just keep doing you and keep up the great stories.

Great story, loved the change in hierarchy. Very nice to influence someone to think better of themselves. Can't wait for the neighbor and then Mom. Allison at Harvard should be interesting too.

You are a excellent writer and wish you would expand this series as you have some additional people to go. Like how it is not rushed and expand the characters. Keep up the great work

Full of fun and fucking.

Excellent writing!

I can’t wait for Allison.

Loving your story, more please.

I'm loving this series, only have one critique though. I wish the chapters were more than two pages long. 5 stars

I love Della coming out.

One word comes to mind,,,,EXCELLENT!!

Omg Jasmine you just get better and better, what would I not give to have a foursome like this, even better if you could join in. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s UK.

Absolutely fucking sucking wonderful, oh that I would love to do all these depraved pleasures with you too Jasmine. Cunt crazed fucker.

I love a great series and this is great.

Lesson...never try to outsmart a GENIUS aka Matthew. LOL

Interesting, but I’m not sure I go submissiveness, especially with the siister. I give the author credit, however, for her creativity and sexy stories.

Always a good read (4th time)

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SSL does it again...hits right at the heart of a fantastic tale...not just the sex, there is emotional insight here... who's "zooming" who???!!!

I personally think that Matthew is doing more than quite well, considering what Sandra thought was gonna happen!! What a turn of events...I especially loved that Della was given the reins over Sandra and Beth!! She SSSOOO deserved that opportunity, in the face of what she told Matthew was her reason for being submissive. Matthew did SSSSOOOOOO much for her self-esteem and ego with this comparatively minor change in hierarchy among the girls...it shows maturity and caring on his part, along with understanding human nature!!

Another Five**5**Star submission, and the reason we lives your tales!!

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