All Comments on 'Best Summer of Our Lives'

Miss Goody Two Shoes has written a masterpiece of love, affection, and amazing sex. This is not your ordinary erotic story. The Best Summer of Our Lives is truly a magnificent love story that will put a smile on your face, make you laugh, and for those that are sentimental, bring tears to your eyes. This story will bring back memories of new love, true love and the excitement and nervousness that come with that. The characters jump off the page and are as real as life – you will truly love them and cheer them on. And yes, there are some very hot, steamy sex scenes in there, written only as this talented writer can craft them, so you won’t be disappointed. If you are looking for a short and quick erotic thrill, this is not it. But if you are ready to sit down with a long tale of love and romance, and the best eroticism on written page, then you have come to the right place. Congratulations on writing a masterpiece Miss Two Shoes. My hat is off to you for a work of art, full of love and arousal. Magnificent! -- Rogue

This is an amazing love story. So real. So tender, and so erotic. This is writing at its best

This was such a coool story, loved it from beginning to end!

Thoroughly enjoyed your story. There's a song titled, "Only thing money can't buy is true love and home grown tomatoes." You've nailed the true love part. Good luck on the contest.

Once again our Dear Miss Two Shoes has the amazing ability to combine sweet, sensual, romance with hot, hungry, sex. She constantly amazes with her ability to make the reader fall in love with the characters. We want the best for them because we enjoy the thought of being them. Those who shy away from her writing because of it's length are missing out on perhaps the very best Literotica has to offer them. The stories are real, the characters are real and the love is real. If this story does not make you laugh, cry, and "excited" then I honestly don't know what is wrong with you. I have been fortunate enough to provide some small assistance with this story and I couldn't be more honored and privileged to do so. If you are on the fence about reading her works I implore you to do so. You won't be disappointed.

Best story I have ever read on Literotica, really got in to characters, almost as good as 50 shades, and that is no disgrace. Well wriiten and thanks.

Great story, great action, absolutely fantastic!

Favourited!

Thank you for your amazing writing. Thank you.

TRULY AMAZING STORY OF LOVE, PASSION, AND SEX

Just an amazing story about two lovers and I only wish that I had met a young woman like that when I was a young man. I fell in love and married, but while it was pretty intense and the colors were more vibrant and all that, somehow it fell short of what you wrote. That said, the story didn't read like fiction, or fantasy, as it had a sense of reality to it and I am envious of the characters and your ability to write them.

Five stars for sure.

This story was simply amazing. you are indeed the best writer i have had the pleasure to read. thank for such an enjoyable lovely story.. love it .

best summer of our lives.

And I thought I had a fun summer. This story is beautifully erotic. Great job.

Our writer captures a really amazing young couple in their first time together. Erotic build up, great first time experience, great travel sex, and complete consummation of real love. WOW how do two people get that close? It's sexy, erotic and loving. Simply the BEST!

Where was Annabelle when I was in college? :)

Great job, as always, GoodyGoodyTwoShoes! Excellent story line, hot sex and perfect pace, which can make or break a story! Five stars!

-Writerotica

More please

Extremely good plotting, a real feel-good story. Congratulations on writing a stormer entry!

Great story; now back to Luke and Amy.

Thnx really enjoyed and thnx for writing in one part couldn't have waited for series to get complete.

But doesn't mean you can't conitnue....

This story was terrific!!! I enjoyed the way you wrote it and how you express the characters love for each other. My favorite series on this site its your Luke and Amy story so I'm a huge fan of yours. Thanks for another great story and I look forward to the next L&A installment. =)

Loved it. C-Baby

GGTS,

As I was checking your page for an update to the "Luke and Amy" series (chapter 10 please, :) ), I noticed this with a 4.85 rating. Knowing how good that series is, I started to read "The Best Summer...". Even though I prefer incest to romance (that sounds odd), this was hot, fun, interesting, and a bag of chips.

Well done and good luck with the contest!

Loved it you deserve to win

A wonderful blend of romance and lust, vividly realized. Characterization and pacing were strong. I liked the way you eased into the physical relationship, letting their friendship deepen and evolve. Well done!

This story was fantastic and sooooo hot u r a gifted writer :) keep up the Amazeing work

Equisite Miss Two Shoes!

Wonderful writing.

Absolutly Fantastic read Best Summer of Our Lives is amazing, I thought I wouldnt be able to enjoy anything as much as I do Luke & Amy but I randomly chose to read this from your list and wow you are one fantastic writer, This is a lovely romantic story with the added erotica (the way I like it), I would publish this as a book and make the movie in an instant!!! Move over 50 Shades of Grey MGGTS is here. I cant wait for another instalment of Luke & Amy but I would also love to hear more of Fisher and Annabelle's adventures. A heartfelt well done on winning and pray there alot more to come. Keep up the good work am hooked nothing else could live up to you. Mr C

Thank you for some hours of joy and love

My only complaint is that there isn't more.

How about another episode in the continuing story of Fisher and Annabelle?

I hate to say it, but after 12 pages of writing, the story could've been better. The build up in the initial stages was just....too long...pacing the story better would've helped what is a good story into an excellent one. Just my humble opinion. Thanks for writing this though!

I was carried along by the description of this love affair like I was airborne. You sculpted two beautiful young people. This is mythic.

wow this really was a wonderful story. I loved the characters and how relatable they were. PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER!!! LOVE THIS!

I thoroughly enjoyed your love story but, it was a little too "good" for my taste. I would have liked to have seen a bit more tension between the lovers at times such as a past boyfriend(or girlfriend) rearing their heads and creating uncertainty between them. As I was reading I kept expecting this to happen and distracted myself due to my expectations. Also, your segues between scenes was a bit abrupt and thus confusing. Having said the above, I was not distracted enough to diminish my vote for a 5.

I Couldn't stop reading it I LOVED IT!!

I wish I was Fisher!

That is one damn love story with some erotic, poetic sprinkles thrown in. Bravo!

Impressive!

This is the third time I have read this. Thanks for a classic love story.

Why did you keep mentioning her sordid past, her unhappy relationship with her own family, and her insecurities without ever bringing them into the main story line? You built up the extreme differences between her modest and unsatisfactory upbringing with his obvious silver spoon but did not create a resolution to the disparity.

Wonderful story I loved it!!!!!

The best story from the best author...

I am in awe of this story. It is the best one I have ever read on this site. The characters, storyline, situations, and language were all excellent. This was a carefully crafted masterpiece. Thano you for sharing your talent.

I loved your story for its beauty, romance, varied settings, character development. You should keep writing. I cannot wait for more. Just fantastic and of such superior quality than many of the stories here.

So sweet so much love just awesome. Thank u for sharing that and I hope u continue

the dialogues are a bit too corny and stiff...

This story is utter genius. The way you filled it with such raw emotion is amazing. Please consider writing novels and books, then publishing them. Would buy them all. Thanks for this story!!!

Your turn of a phrase and shading the story with closely held fears gave an artful balance down the tightrope of this delicate romance. I felt the rush of a summer love and the anticipation of the family meeting and the bonding with his sister. I look forward to reading all of your work. Thank you so very much.

A good story, well told, if a little long (I think in two parts might have been less problematic).

But a good story. . .

Thank You

HP

Always happy to say when I find a great story. But this one is a real gem!

A beautiful love story that feels real. Added to that some seriously good sex.

Thank you very much.

A bit drawn out at times but really a lovely story.

Honestly one of the best I've ever read. Loved everything about it

Very well written, on the whole.

My deficiency was too much teenage crush behavior.

They're past that.

If they briefly felt like teenagers? Okay...but not ALL THIS!

About 427 fewer redundant "I love you" lines too, please?

Well done - loved it!

Wish it were possible to award ten stars.

The story kept me spellbound, but in the back of my mind was the fear that something terrible was going to happen toward the end. The relationship was beyond words, and I kept expecting a disaster. I was so pleased that it ended on a pleasant note!

You should become an author. Kudos for the story. Great "JOB".

For something to happen and it never did. I was sure one of her exes would show up or be one of his relatives. I agree with MadBrown. Needed some tension.

It can be magical or a holocost. This was a great story that brightened my day. 5

Detail repeated can take the reader's focus off the story.

Nobody actually talks like they do in bed.

Wow. Just...wow. I absolutely loved the build up. It turned me on so much!!!!!

They were so sweet to each other. Can you write an epilogue? I’d love to see how their lives turn out.

Loved this story. I did not put it down all Saturday afternoon I was so captivated by the real characters and the evolving story line. I had prepared myself for something bad to happen - an old lover or maybe even Candace to appear and make a wedge; then possibly be happily resolved. Such a masterful story as the layers were revealed and developed.

I realize it was a long story and surely takes much effort and concentration to complete, but after the introduction of his sis Holly I expected and was disappointed at the lack of more interaction or at least some closure with her portion of the story. Holly was a loose end for me at the finish. Though not a rating lowering situation.

Along that same line, even though it is obvious they lived happily ever after, I wanted to know just a smidge more - marriage, kids, jobs something

The only thing I can think of that was wrong about this story, was that it ended.

5/5

I kept waiting for something to go wrong. Maybe his parents investigate her past and don't like what they find, or Holly showed them her erotic stories, or, or, . . . I breathed a sigh of relief at the end, but more tension and drama would not have been unwelcome.

Excellent story!

Great characters, great build up, great all 'round!

11/10 Stuffed Otters!!!!!

Please, somebody write another chapter. Annabelle needs to give her husband a baby!

I loved it. It's that simple. Everything was great. Annabelle is one fine fuckin' piece of ass. Damn...She is a sexual dynamo. As great as it was, it could have been better. How? Just a little conflict. For instance, maybe when Annabelle was meeting Fisher's parents the father went too far and she felt humiliated and ran off - taking a bus/taxi/Uber back to her apartment. It looks like they're going to break up because Annabelle does feel that she's not worthy of being in that world. The world of financial success - big houses - fancy cars. Of course, Fisher would fight for her and win her back - the father would have to do a whole lotta ass-kissing. After all, he was just testing her to see if she was a gold digger/worthy of his perfect son. You know the drill. I know that's a little cliche, but it would have added some uncertainty to the story. Maybe it could have been Holly who was finally able to get the both of them together in one room and finally talk...and there is the repairing of their relationship. I don't know...I think something like that would have made things more interesting. It's a great love story, for sure. Well done!

Wonderful story. Well told.

Damn that was hot and perfect for a nice sweet romance story. So glad they both found true love. The only thing missing was a nice epilogue showing their future where they had a family and a great life, still maintained that active sex life into their golden years, and she still loved being his dirty slut in the bedroom. But I think it's a fair assumption that that is what happens next. Now if only I could find *my* Annabelle...