All Comments on 'Beth Begins'

by bittykitty869

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sirhugssirhugsover 9 years ago
I was expecting Mom to say something...

...about knowing why they really snuck downstairs, about how great Chris & JP's cocks are...

well written. would have loved more detail regarding the sex but well worth a "5" on my peter meter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
fucking got what she fucking deserved!!!!

Nice fuck and cum in mouth story but the heroine is STOOPID to try and do two guys at the same time!!!!!!! One at a time suckandfuck would have accomplished the same thing WITHOUT the photos her dad got to look at. I guess the only way to get her dad over the upsetness he feels after seeing the photos from her uncles is to suckandfuck him too!!!! Go for it little girl - you don't have enough cum in your filthy snatch yet!

bittykitty869bittykitty869over 9 years agoAuthor

don't worry sirhugs, step mom will get her turn.

SlutMom1975SlutMom1975over 9 years ago

Reminds me so much of when I was Beth's age............xxxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Chapter Order

Beth Begins,

Daddy Punishes Beth,

Beth's Brothers

Beth’s Bathtime

Daddy Finally Takes His Turn

Daddy Gives Step Mom a Turn

* You're welcome bittykitty869*

daddy1950daddy1950almost 9 years ago
Disgustingly depraved ...

loved it! Five stars

slavegirl97slavegirl97over 8 years ago

your stories are truly beautiful ... thank you smiles

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Obviously a five-but not a five A

This was very good and I did like it but I would have liked it more if she had included being on the pill in her forward planning

Sounds like quite a family

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Very naughty! ;)

Marklynda2Marklynda2about 1 year ago

A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of Beth's (your?) adventures. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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