All Comments on 'Beth's Mom'

I'd look forward to read a sequel. Good job.

Have you looked up the word incest in a dictionary lately?

It should be "mature."

I read the incest section because the relationship makes the sex so much more exiting. Stories like this that purport to be incest but are not irritate me, I have nothing against these stories, just post them in the right place.

According to the dictionary, sex between in-laws, step relatives, friends of the family and family of friends are not incest, even sex between closely related people of the same sex is not incest, but I think an exception should be made there as the relationship does exist.

Very nice. Perhaps it's miscategorized, but ignore the nitpickers. It's still a solid story, whether in "Incest" or "Mature" or whatever.

I would consider sleeping with your girlfriend's mom a big taboo -- and I bet she would too!

Very nice start! Looking forward to some sequels...

This is definitely an incest-fantasy story. This category is full of women with Daddy-fantasies about older men who aren't actually related; a Mom-fantasy is no big deal at all. It's still hot.

We need more, much more of this one. Perhaps "Mom" can begin fucking you, and at her level of matrimony it would be suggested that she had not used birth control for some time? Maybe by the time daughter returns from college, "Mommy" will be 2-3 months pregnant?

Hot start. Keep building on these two. And who knows what Beth might say or do upon returning home.

As to nitpicking: "Incest" according to accepted definitions, definitely not. "Incest" according to the average person, possibly. "Taboo",very much. And the genre is "Incest/Taboo."

Anyhoo, more of Liz and Brad's misadventures before Beth returns. Maybe Liz will reconside where this might be heading act and resist the obvious conclusion, allowing Brad to become "assertive?"

Chunks,

I found your story quite enjoyable. Some girlfriends just have sexy Moms. Although the other reviewers were right,who cares if it's mature or incest. It was still a really hot story.

I never had mother-in-law like that.

Boyd

She's gonna take a dip in the pool and he's gonna take a dip in...

I came untouched just reading this! Not ashamed to admit it. Great story line, and very well written.

I am curious about the women's names though. Are Liz and Beth supposed to be two sides of the same woman (namely "Elizabeth")? The coincidence is striking, since women don't *usually* share their first name with their mother, in my experience.

Otherwise, I'll echo the other comments below: it's hot, we need more stories from this writer, and as a taboo subject, the category is fine by me.

Very hot. We need a sequel, please! Let's see what

happens when they finally go all the way.

Loved it! Esp Her having the boy call her mom.

So, Chapter 2???

Why was there never a sequel to this story?

and i hope it continues. But it is not incest to have sex with your future mother-in-law just a good old fuck with a sexy women - more please of this tale.

Don"t stop there! Surely you can think of more to add to this story?

I agree with dliter; perhaps this can be a build to the actual intercourse and affair with her. Please continue this story!

another winner.

this story is awesome to me

probably because my future mother in law almost did something similar to me

rather i had two of my future mother in laws do something like this to me

ann and joann

this story needs to be continued and add some voyeurism

Not YOU'RE for heaven's sake.

A decent little quickie story with that nasty flub in the middle messing up the flow like a noisy fart during a church sermon.

Proofread first and you'll get genuine praise. You're (you are) better than some of the illiterate praises heaped onto you by well-intentioned fans. You write well enough for me to cringe when I spot a silly goof like that one. If you were actually just crap at it, I'd never bother to read more than a few lines.

MPP

I like your writing style, always fun to read :)

How does getting a handjob from your mom count as incest?

Getting a handjob from your girlfriends mom is not remotely incest.

a well written story that I enjoyed reading and I am not posting as anonymous!

Even if it's not incest, It's still a taboo - at least I don't think society approves of MILs giving HJs (wish it did!). I'd love to see this go farther. I'm sure she could use more sunscreen...

" just think of it as my way of helping you stay faithful to my little girl. "

So helping him to be unfaithful keeps him faithful?

Convoluted logic, to say the least!!

While technically not an incest story, I liked it. Please add a few more chapters. This is a wonderful beginning - playing with "mom", having gf join them....more??

Loved this story we want more maybe get the gf in on it

This definitely needs a followup. So hot!

Everyone else is right get the gf in on it and keep the story going

You owe us!

Agree,need more of this

he should stick with calling her LIZ , that would make them having sex

easy for them. no part two ?

This was a great story but I felt I could only give it 4 stars because it stopped too soon. There should have been more. Any chance of another chapter to make this a 5 star story?

I imagine Brad with a bit of hair in the middle of that muscular chest, certainly a treasure trail, and healthy pubes that Liz's hand just loves to touch.

Does Brad and Liz go farther and how far. Does the Daughter find out. is she having a fling at school while he is earning Money to continue college.

Thanks, looking forward to part II.

I didn't realize until after reading this how nice a one page story could be without any fucking. I sincerely hope you will be exploring a bit of this relationship before Beth comes home for summer break

great story cant wait to read more of it and keep up the good work

WE all want a sequel. You'll lose your following if you don't give us an ending.

You are a good writer, I don't like crudities as most don't and respect woman.

REgards

what happens next?

here i am, all dressed up and nowhere to put it.

We NEED more

There's got to be a sequel!

Would have given it a 4 but since no sequel it gets rated lower.

surprising that girl friend`s mom did not get a fuck from would be son in law

Nice Intro to what could be a Very Nice story. "Mom" clearly has the HOTS for young Brad, and she certainly deserves a chance to get her Pussy pounded in return. And after that she would undoubtably want to wrap her lips around his big cock and bring him off again as Brad ate her out. After that, there is the rest of the summer to explore how far her fantasies about seducing aa big young stud could go. Encore, please!

Liz needs the same coating of coconut oil.

She too has tensions in need of relief.

Sorry, but a good story depends on verisimilitude and when you have a woman who would have had to have had a child at age 16, but whose husband was an attorney, you have become a hack. Let her be 42 or 44. And couldn't we have at least a few stories in which no one owns a pool? Cliche after cliche!

You have to continue the story line.

The kind every man needs when taking a wife, lol

,"releasing the most magnificent set of tits I'd ever seen."

Maybe i am ignorant but very few "magnificent tits" i have seen fit into a "sports bra".

Everyone has their own definition. Probably the most magnificent set i have ever seen are the ones I am about to look at right now.

I liked this story but it is begging for more.

Great story, how about a continuation?

That's the every guy wud love to get massaged

it was an average story so i gave it 3 stars. i felt this story could have gone on much longer. Perhaps Liz sucks Brad's cock, they fuck on the deck or in the pool or both. Brad sucks on those magnificent breasts. He fucks her in the ass, they go inside and he fucks her doggie. He might sleep in her bedroom from now on. This had a lot of potential.

My wife's sister is a massage therapist. I wonder if she would do this for me someday.

more :)

I doubt there will be more chapters because this story is at least 15 years old. Still, I wish there was more. I would have liked Brad to fuck the shit out of Liz. Beth wouldn't need to know.

However short and incomplete, this is an interesting short story.

5*

BJ

So where’s the rest? Would be better if it went further.

Great start thanks.

Herrlich geile Geschichte.

Outstanding, needs a part two and three follow-up..........():\

Awesome, he gets to fuck his gf mom.

Started out great but very disappointed end

This story is unfinished

And then..... definitely needs a continuation! Great start. Having been a massage therapist I know how good they feel and how they can affect both people involved. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Please nee more!!!

WTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU GOT ALMOST EVERYBODY SAYING THIS NEEDS CONTINUE MUST CONTINUE

- COULDN'T EVER MAKE RETURN DOING MORE THIS STORY

(( EXTREMELY GLAD DIDN'T BOTHER READ EVERYTHING )) (( EXTREMELY GLAD

ONLY SKIMMED THROUGH EVERYTHING ))

5 Stars...even though its not incest, not in the traditional sense, anyway. 😏

Great story in dire need of additional chapter(s).

I see you most recently returned to writing on this site. Happy to see. Perhaps at this time you will consider adding to this story.

Welcome back!

G

Great short story but definitely I needs more chapters. There’s great potential here for more stories.

I am

Adding my voice to the clamor for additional chapters on this story . A lot of potential for some very hot possibilities . What you did here was a terrific start and all I can say is I hope to check back soon and discover more content . I can only ask humbly and with hope you can gift all of us with your creativity and skill . Please !

And then?

It's obvious you intended to continue the story, so please do.

Um where is the incest at other than that I wasn't impressed

I thought Liz would undress and Brad would play with her body and then they would make love why did you stop complete the story

Not bad but not great.

Bill S.

I was expecting page 2 and it would be fun to take this story until mom shared him with her daughter….

Interesting... thank you.

WOW!!! This is another of your stories worthy of a six...except you didn't follow it with another chapter - you left me hanging, er, hard and sticking straight up in the air. And leaking. And wanting to read more.

I thought it was just right. Some really hot story and leaving some to the imagination.

wow, I wish you had followed this up with more chapters, this is a good story.. so many ways to make this go. daughter comes home on break and she and mom sets him up and gets caught only for the daughter to join in and explain they have been looking for someone who they could share. gets them both pregnant.... oh boy