All Comments on 'Betrayal 07'

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rendevouswithdestiny over 11 years ago

well about time

Took u long enuf man

Still just amazing .... w8ing for mor pls write faster

ralxan over 11 years ago

great writing

Great writing.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Already one of my favorite series on Literotica.

willieone over 11 years ago

Finally lit posts it!

You told us when you submitted this chapter but lit seems to have taken it time. Awesome chapter!

Latinlover15 over 11 years ago

Good god

This story just gets better and better

katgoddess1 over 11 years ago

Wow

That was intense! I loved it.

Anonymousover 11 years ago

Loving It

Even though I read the first version - it is so much better and such a fantastic story - good work!

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04/12/21 So now i have the time, the desire, and finally the passion. Gonna take this story that I love and i'm going to make it into a book. I'm going to leave what is here as teaser and a testament to where i started. When I have a final product, I will let everyone know w...

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