All Comments on 'Betrayal Bk. 01'

Long read. good so far. Hope you can keep my interest.

The story is pregant with expectations. You have succeeded in keeping my attention and I especially loved the initial training of Lisa. Keen on the sequel.

Very detailed story. Truly disappointed getting to the end and not seeing a second chapter. Looking forward to more.

The characters are well drawn, it'd be good to discover more about the world they're in. Kind of hope that Gan gets to rescue the sisters at some point though...

I wish there was a warning that this was never continued with. While I appreciate its free, i wouldnt have bothered getting into this if it wasnt continued on. Its a shame. Its quite good.

where is the rest of the story? you cannot leave everyone in suspense