All Comments on 'Betsy & the McBrides Ch. 03'

hey, if you're going to bog down an erotic story with math, get it right. Mathilda should be 56, not 54.

Betsy is good and a no-nonsense woman. she knows what string to pull. He pulling matilda into her web she gains a better insight on Kenny and the rest of the family.

I couldn't get enough of this author. I never even looked at any feedbacks before I came accross Egmont Grigor. He is a real talent. I love his writing and love to read the continuation of this story as well.

Are you ever going to finish the Betsy story? It was well done and started off well. You opened up a number of story lines and now I've been cast adrift.

I would really like to read more about these interesting characters.

Traveller

Still waiting for the next chapter!

Great story line!

Please finish the story. Three years is just too long to wait.

come on man, finish the story! its funny as hell im taking the bait because im dying to know how it all ends. im guessing gratuitous amounts of sex, a little violence, and a happy ending?

Where is part 4.....

Now I can't trust you and will have to check you finish a story before starting it.

tom anon

Did Part 4 ever come?

4?

"PART 4 to Come."

You just can't leave this story hanging like this..... please finish it off.