by regularguy13
WTF! That was some Town Halloween Party. I would love to attend that one... I don't think I would partake of the action, but I would love to meet the characters and watch the fuckfest.
Not a very realistic party but decent sex... or should that be indecent sex?
I love your stories, I only wish the whole nite had been explained in much more detail. Keep writing your stories are always instant favorites and we will never get enough
Hot story; however, her brother deserved a good hard spanking for not getting permission before penetrating her.
this seems more of a nonconsensual /tricked the younger into something. by throwing her into the party with know heads up makes it more of a rape set up.
The beginning and middle were both very good, very solid writing. I was getting a real feel for the characters and their motives. Suddenly, however, it was like a full-on torrent. Everything got rushed and it was over a lot faster than it began. A LOT could have happened in those hours at the party- so much more than was conveyed. It's okay to take your time with a story, you know. Play it out in your head and see where IT can take YOU, not the other way around. Just remember: the more time you spend on a story = more time the story can be enjoyed by your audience.
Nothing puts a smile on my face like a slightly silly and very sexy incest tale! Well done!