All Comments on 'Better Than Watching Leno'

by JorisKHuysmans

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
God stuff!

You certainly got my attention with this story - especially the build-up of intrigue as the protagonist was still in voyeur phase. I also liked the touch of irony at the end.

Well written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
WOW

You are one of the best new authors I have read in a while. Keep up the GREAT work. I love the way you flesh out details and create a world instead of just some sex. GREAT STUFF!

FreaknutFooFreaknutFooalmost 13 years ago
Eh

Good story, but cheesy ending. I still enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Clever.

I didn't see the ending coming till the last few secs, as intended by the author. How often does that happen in here?Just discovered you Joris and i will be looking ofr more!

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