All Comments on 'Better Then Before: Charlie and Michael'

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lancewannabelancewannabeover 19 years ago
Oh to be young again

I liked the story. Sure wish I had known my first time what I do now about pleasing a woman. Probably would have turned out much like this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
oh charlie

sweet but got kinda ruined with group story thing and the end. still well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sweet, romantic & loving

This was a wonderful story about making love rather than just fucking. I like that! - Dana

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Curious

Would love to find out what happens to Mike and Charlie. Looks like they aren't heading for marriage or anything what with separating and being with others, but the two characters I did find interesting. As for the story itself thought it was nice how they went from friends to lovers, but paced themselves even though both wanted to just do it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Crap

Biggest load of rubbish I have ever read

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Total Rubbish

Written by a total wanker

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
To th wanker above

I bet its to small to find

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To all the authors I've stolen from - ya caught me red-handed - at least that's all I'll admit to having in my hand. None of these stories ever occurred - except between my ears, which I should probably go and clean now.