All Comments on 'Between a Witch and a Devil'

My only complaint was the big paragraphs, it might scare some people away but I'm glad I didn't let it scare me. ;)

Okay maybe not my only complaint. I hate that it ended! I really like Cleve...the way he helped her out was cool. Looking forward to reading more of your work!

I'm sorry, but I couldn't make it through the story. The lack of correct punctuation and the numerous run on sentences seriously hindered its readability. I did see good descriptive words in the short part I managed to read, but it takes more than that to make a good story. You must have the proper grammatical mechanics to go along with it.

No matter the problems with punctuation, this is a very good story.

I enjoyed this story. Good job.