- Romance
- Between The Walls Ch. 03
- Comments
All Comments on 'Between The Walls Ch. 03'
by TheLastNavigator
- 27 Comments
Anonymousover 11 years agogreat johhny is a wuss,jd is an asshole, and lou is a man twister. loves johnny ,but is wanting to fuck jd.slutty isnt it
Anonymousover 11 years agoTalk about a cock tease, she really is a bitch, Johnny is a wimp and JD an asshole who takes advantage of drunk women, well done for writing 3 of the WORST characters I have ever read and please learn the difference between YOUR and YOU'RE and where they are used.
ariesgirlover 11 years agoI can't blame JD for going after Lou or blame Lou for doing her thing. Johnny had years to make his intentions known with Lou so its his loss for now. I just hope Johnny doesn't become too much of a jealous ass towards Lou.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI loved but if it takes years for an update next time I'll...well I'd be highly upset:-)
Y did I smile at the end? I'm completely serious.
brittybeeover 11 years agoI liked it. Moreeee!:)
If others don't, why leave mean comments? Pointless and counterproductive.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI am so GLAD you updated. I love this story sooo much!! I don't know. I like Johnny for Louise. Although JD seems like a cool enough guy and he seems to really like Louise. But that's the thing, both Johnny and JD like her and I like both Johnny and JD, lol! Decisions, decisions. I'm still going to root for Johnny though. They have history together and Johnny seems to be in love with Louise although if JD keeps it up he will probably fall for her too. In the end it's who Louise is in love with and while JD may be a distraction from Johnny, he is not Johnny. Anyway, I'll stop rambling. Thanks again for the update, I cannot wait for more!
Anonymousover 11 years agoLou and JD end up together. Johnny has waited way too long to express his feelings and it really irks me when friends like each ither but don't go for it. Great chapter.
Nightpleasureover 11 years agoI think he is going to try to kill Johnny, which is going to cause a problem in the triangle.
Anonymousover 11 years agoSo glad for the update. Can't wait for the next chapter, because things are getting good. :-) -DC
Anonymousover 11 years agoTeam JD. He seems more stable. Johnny waited too long and has a disconcerting possessive streak going there, quite unattractive. Can see that a conflict is being built up. Will be an interesting explosion to 'watch'.
tigerrasabout 11 years agoI think Lou need a reality check. How can you be in love with one man.
Next thing you know she is trying to sleep with another man.It is her fault
to she could have easily told Johnny that she is in love with him it work
both ways. She sound like a easy lay. But i do love this story you are a
magnificent writer a gave you five golden stars that you deserve keep
up the great work.I dont like JD.
tigerrasabout 11 years agoI think Lou need a reality check. How can you be in love with one man.
Next thing you know she is trying to sleep with another man.It is her fault
to she could have easily told Johnny that she is in love with him it work
both ways. She sound like a easy lay. But i do love this story you are a
magnificent writer a gave you five golden stars that you deserve keep
up the great work.I dont like JD.
TheLastNavigatoralmost 11 years agoAuthorI'm definitely trying to continue with this story, but after getting some negative feedback it discouraged me a bit. But I must write on, so I will continue. I also have a new story in the works that has been must more prominent in my head so I will try to get two new updates for you all soon. Thanks for the love!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoyou've got ratings of 4.56, 4.69, and 4.63. If you're discouraged with that, what would it take to encourage you, a Nobel Prize for Literature?
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoScrew the negative comments please finish this story. I read this a while ago and just rediscovered it today, please continue.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoPlease do not let people discourage you from writing. I LOVE this story! Sure, there may be some people who do not like it, but who cares. You like, you wrote, now post it. It's YOUR story and what you are feeling. As long as it pleases you disregard what everyone else says, especially if it isn't constructive criticism and people are just being rude or personal. For every person that does not like it, someone else will, even if they do not post that they do. I hope you continue here and also try posting to Valent Chamber, if you want more coverage. I cannot wait for more!!!
phoenixeyealmost 11 years agoI know that some negative comment might discourage you, but that shouldn't keep you from finishing a story others might find lovely. I am one of those people and I would like to read more.
chocolatesistaover 10 years ago2 men like her, please more chapters needed and wanted...
Lane1671about 9 years agodo not allow negative comments to undermine you. Don't modify the plot to accommodate us; it would be all over the place and probably just implode. Your submission could be 100% error free but some spiteful person will have something irrelevant to say. Yes, there are some spelling errors and words used incorrectly but those things are fixable. The criticisms are overly harsh and not constructive and were posted intentionally to rattle you and to incite arguments with your fans. Please continue/finish this series.
