All Comments on 'Beyond Hell and Back Ch. 02'

Much better than the first part. I couldn't quite get why Farrah was able to let Holly go, that surely Holly would summon enough guts to go to the cops.

I like her transformation, and hope she is able to settle things with Farrah, but good.

I know you said at the beginning of Part 1 the story doesn't have a sweet happy ending, but that can cover a lot of territory. I can see Holly getting revenge on Farrah, going back to a good life with Rachel, without necessarily being a "sweet, happy ending".

A very good 2nd chapter :)

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I aboslutely loved this one. It had the right amount of everything. It showed us that Holly was tender but at the same time loved to take charge of her lover in bed. I love the shift you gave the character of Holly. Obviously going through what she did in chapter one would have messed her up a little that made her always want to be in control and dominant. I loved that shift. I like that fact that you gave her Rachel as a lover. She seems to be a good subby character and I liked the fact that as a dominating lover Holly will go to any lengths to protect her. I think you stopped this chapter at a great cliffhanger. I am really looking forward to part 3. :)

Just as things are looking up for Holly , life deals her another cruel blow or at least to her lover Rachel..

Will Misss Farrah redeem her self and come to the rescue? Only one way to find out. Bring on ch 3

Hallo Smokey!

Wow!... A very pleasurable read... it's getting much better,,, yes!

Thank-you... 5-Stars and 5-More Lovely Orgasms!

Gay Kat..

Even Better The Second Time,,, Yes!

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Hallo Smokey!

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Wow!... My first comment still stands, it's a very pleasurable read... and just getting better and better!

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Using a translator it's amazing just how much it changes what your reading, a couple words here, a phrase there, well I think you see where I'm going!

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Now that my English has improved, I've been re-reading stories in English that I had translated into German... and sometimes it's like I'm reading it for the first time!

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Thank-you... 5&5, 5-Stars and 5-More Orgasms!

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