All Comments on 'Big Beautiful Boss'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
more chapters please

I want to read more of the Rick and Sharon and maybe include the girlfriend with the boss lady doing jennifer.

Pat M.

Atlanta,Ga.

magic10fingers4magic10fingers4over 10 years ago
Ah, YES

A bbw is so exceptional - the hard bodies just don't have the movement and the utter joy like a bbw - skin to grasp, jiggle and to then just suck -

Thank you for your story - just so damn yummy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Had one like this

I had a BBW like this. Oh, so nice and filled with passion and satisfying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

But only slightly spoiled by you using numbers and not words.

2 absolutely gorgeous breasts. They weren't saggy, like 2 sacks

It would have read better if only you'd written two instead of 2.

Don't fall into lazy writing.

X-FactorX-Factorover 3 years agoAuthor

Agreed. This was written fourteen years ago and I have long since stopped doing that

Evil_MonarchEvil_Monarch12 months ago

She was fairly faithful to her husband, only having cheated on him a handful of times.

lol

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