All Comments on 'Big Orange Dewdrop'

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fire_breezefire_breezeover 9 years ago

A stunning, intense piece, beautifully written. Thank you.

mikoli5763mikoli5763over 10 years ago
Oh yes it is!

Orange would be the perfect compromise color! Go big Orange!

patientleepatientleeover 10 years ago
I guess the moral of the story

Is compromise. Although, I'm not sure orange is a good compromise. ;-). Fun story.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 10 years ago
"Dara, don't move...

I want to complete the crossword puzzle."

Not only erotic, and well done, but funny as well. Great story. Good luck in the Summer Lovin' contest.

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