All Comments on 'Bigrig Ch. 04'

I REALY LIKE THIS STORY, BUT IT READS FAST SO I WISH THEY WERE LONGER.

You tale is unfolding well. You don't give away too much at a time and always leave me wanting more.

You love doing that to us... leavin' us hangin'.. so we will want to continue readin'. Well... i LOVE it too!!! That is one of the reasons i like your style so much. You know what the reader wants/needs from the story.

My mind is swirling with the possibilities as to what might be wrong with Jonathan's stomach...as well as how him and Greg will deal with each other while Bruce is gone. Will this cause friction between the older men if Greg and Jonathan form a special bond while Bruce is away? ...

loved it again!!

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now on my 'favorite' author list!

You are incredibly talented My boy, now on to Ch. 5.

All My love forever,

your Master,

Lucky

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great so far! I love the way the details of the characters and their relationships are unfolding, and good work with the pace, and the balance of detail and strength of the storyline. one thing though, the way Greg refers to Jonathan as "bitch" and "property" kind of irks me, and raises questions as to his ingenuity about caring. however I trust this attitude will somehow work out and explain itself.

I love you lil johnathan