All Comments on 'Bike Ride with My Daughter Ch. 03'

by varun

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
PULVERIZED!!

Man, you pulverized your family - I wish i was there. i did luv to have one of the holes!!

merrySMmerrySMalmost 5 years ago
Editor

You really need an editor.

ronylolronylolover 3 years ago

super story want more of this series

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
farcical

ruined by being to overtop - 350 men really!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Gr8 story varun. Though you have to improve your English I luv the theme . Good work. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

luvd it,

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