All Comments on 'Bili Takes a Slave'

and so very well written. Thank you for your time and much thought that must have went into this very well written love story of true submission,pleasure and pain. i surely hate for this one to end but as always...some things must end even the good ones*sigh* respectfully a fan in Texas

longer but I betcha he could take her within an inch of her life then bring her back only to do it again and again until - well sadly one day she was gone ---- only to be found smiling but dead of her own hand - unable to accept his next new slave which really didn't trouble him as the sales of slaves weren't bringingmuch anymore - especially as torn up and used as she was.

Now there is a conclusion that has it all - realism and pain!!!

no, This was not sex or power it was simplify pain and murder. Her life did end that night and I hope he will be caught and given his chance for an ending with pain.

very good story wish there was more I know it was along time ago this story was done if could say anything bad about it is that its sad that he took away the feeling for slow love making where she didn't really enjoy it with out pain would of been nice if could of had that as well hope that made sense