All Comments on 'Bill and Trudi Go Undercover'

by rachel_hirt

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good

job. The beginning was a little weak and somewhat difficult to follow but you did much better with the sex scene in the RV. Hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Everybody goes.

Everyone involved should have been fired. The sex scenes were hot though.

RedguyTxRedguyTxover 13 years ago
Great Story Telling

I've read all 3 of your stories. You have a great imagination and should keep writing.

I'm working on my 3rd submission myself.

Rock on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hot

I was wet before the end of the first round!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Fucking great

Oh fucking wonderful, my fuck buddie and I creamed like crazy then fucked and sucked each others brains out till we passed out. Only to start over when we recovered. More and more please and soon. I just love to get drunk on the nectar from sexed up cunts

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