All Comments on 'Billy Turns Tables on Step Sister Ch. 04'

pregnant on porn does not go together in my book

since they were step family cant he just marry carla for cover and keep slamming emily?

What's with all the stories where a brother or son gets his sister, mom, aunt, etc, pregnant? Do you really think there's a lot of fucking going on with all the 2am feedings, 3am diapers, 4am crying, and so on? Sleep deprivation and a profound lack of time "for sex"? Where's the eroticism in that?

this is getting hotter as we go

Emily's ex moved on but his son stayed with Emily and her daughter Carla. They became a family that loved each other and fucked and sucked together - OFTEN! Billy got Emily to admit she wanted Billy's baby even though she was 38. She got pregnant, had the baby: now Carla said it was her turn to have Billy's baby!! Fun story!!

I absolutely love this story i really hope you keep it going. it gotme so hot i came 3 times while reading it.

yes i know the sex life slows down after pregnancy but when there are three adults to take care of the babies it doesn't have to stop. Honestly can't wait to read more

I see that this is a finished story but would like to read what the next 20 year spring for them and his fathers reaction.

I thinks it great that he is getting them pregnant and its not like there's a chance of birth defects because there isn't and blood relations. He should marry Carla also

you wrote this as if you were him , and that makes it even more interesting. please write more , want to see what , and where I would be if I had been him

Great story, please continue it

As i said, a little power play would fit nicely.

On a side note those two ladies going to wear that poor boy out before he's twenty five. He'll be happy, but broken. Lol.

Nice work.

Critique:The story telling leveled out. You've already told what you wanted and this felt like the slow coast down after the roller coaster ride. There is still story here, but the reader can do with that what they will, to give whatever finish they want to have happen. Nice ending.

You wrote to the category readership with this one, but to only one element of them as you saw from your comments.. It's hard to pick just which side of the story this category they will like at times. Pregnant, found out, lynched...hard to say on any given day.

Nice story work still. Had the feel of the finish line from the beginning so you played it right. Good work.

MST

I need more of this story, I'll literally sitting on the edge of my dear right now!

More please how about marriage

But now Dad needs to find out his Ex has had a Baby. and that Billy & Carla are Married with Carla Pregnant. Letting Dad know he will be a Grand Father. There's No Mention of Billy's Mom. What became of her. and since Billy is at College Maybe they could Add some more to the Family.

Make more

Please continue this story?

Must read more

Oh hell C_frommn, are you reading my mind? Oh yeah right, it would need to be the other way around. But hey, great thinkers think alike sometimes, right. Now just let me convince myself of that. This series is going into my favorites list. Not to sound redundant but I do wish this series had more chapters. 5 stars!

A little much at the end, I wish you waited a year or so they both finished college.

A good read.

Now we need to add Carla pregnant with a girl.

We have another generation of horny kids .

Great series, too bad it didn't continue. My one big question who is currently supporting the family and with Billy is busy creating more babies who is going to support them. Oh well they can all go on welfare and become a ward of the state. Well done 5-stars