All Comments on 'Birthday Anal'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very, very nice.

And very similar to the first time Himself and I indulged in such games. So, so long ago it seems, but the delicious tension of the first time entrance never quite disappears, adding to the anticipation and exquisite pleasure/pressure. Mmm, mmmmm!

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
I HOPE THEY WERE BOTH AWARE OF WHAT HAPPENED

at least enough to enjoy and think of a re-peter. TK U MLJ LV NV

darrenfatedarrenfateover 12 years ago

I like this story - especially the way that you built up the tension. You are very descriptive while using a minimum amount of words. Looking forward to reading more from you. Keep writing!

QuietSurpriseQuietSurpriseover 12 years ago
Technicalities

I enjoyed the story, the build up and the background to her desires, but I found the use of 'medical' terminology (for want of a better expression) to be rather off putting. Latin names are not known by most folk, and it just makes it seems something like a biology lesson.

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