All Comments on 'Birthday Badness'

This is a very hot story! In spite of small errors in the English, this is a very well written story and a very good read.

I enjoyed this very much, do I see a sequel in the distance?? I sure hope so. A few minor grammatical errors no big problem and very easy to fix. Keep up the good work, I notice quite a few additional stories that I need to check out.

Nice story, keep it up!

Good story ... too short. Think you can lengthen it any? Thanks.

Loved the story. Really hot. It's Mom and the sister's turn now. Cunt-on-cunt. Nothing better.

Janice in Tacoma

this could have been a real good story IF it had been properly edited and finished.

as is we only get the second chapter out of four or five. it would have been real nice to get the whole story not just a small unedited sample.

Aside from a few spelling mistakes,this was just getting good. You need to explain how mom was willing to have sex with her son, as well as approving what son and daughter were doing. Will she encourage them to have sex? Lot of possibilities to this story.

Just missing many details. Way too big of a jump from mom hearing them & jumping right. In on them.

Bill S.