All Comments on 'Birthday Gift'

... especially since you're teasing us with the pregnancy fantasy thing.

I must admit, I don't get off on your 'creampie' thing; but otherwise, your sibling incest stories are topnotch!

Loved the story, it reminded me of all the times I used to try to catch my sisters naked. Never did, but that doesn't stop me from fantasizing about it. wish they would have given me a gift like that.

waiting for more

one of the best i have read please write more it was so horny hope there is a follow up once again wwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooowwwwwwww

wow do another chapter it was hot I love incest rules

Very erotic, you got inside my head and the rest was just how excited I would get.

Very

HUGS and a kiss to the author

I really enjoyed the seduction and unplanned sex. I would really like to read more about where they go with more gifts....maybe he could give her a gift of life!

"WOW" i wish that was me insted of your brother!

continue

Sizzling hot. Very erotic. Keep it up. ;)

Great story to itself. But like the title says I can see this going farther.

Could somebody make a h manga adaptation for this? Hire a great mangaka (Gunma Kisaragi, Yamatogawa, Yasuie Ryousuke, who else?) Damn good story _waterboy

Mr.?Ms. Hornet, Don mind to continue the story? it was great.

the only real gift of a life time is AIDS or HIV did she give him that? and never add outsiders it ruins the incest angle

Hope they have a lot of hand lotion, cause the boyfriend going to need it so that he doesn't rub it raw when has to resort to hand jobs

It appears Sister has now become a slut, AND the story is no longer pure, unadulterated incest of brother and his sister. Sister will now be using her brother's visit for the pleasure of her boyfriend's homosexual urges, to eat her pussy after the boyfriend hides in the closet (no pun intended), and watches his sister bring her brother in to fuck. When the brother finishes his 30 minute fuckfest with his perverted sister, she ushers him out the door, the boyfriend takes her to bed and ravishes her brother's cum out of her pussy!!

Sorry, but I read thses stories for their incestual content. Not for the pleasure of a female fucking her non-blood related boyfriend!

I thought it was good. Not sure why bigdaddg is crying over some little thing about the boyfriend.

Wtf with all the awsome writing. All the authors here are ducking amazing love the stoy absolutely loved it

would love to read what happens next between Tom and his sister

do you think they will make very long if they in fact ever get married? I don't

...and actually uses it. Long overdue.

That was really fun! Thanks for writing :)

Super hot

This was a very hot story. I would love to read more.