All Comments on 'Birthday Gift to Remember'

Very good story. Flowed nicely. One mistake in the final paragraph. The term is "sordid tale" not sorted.

CONTINUE THIS SHE DESERVE A BABY FROM BRO

Tween is NOT between 19 and 20. Tween is another term for pre-teen...as in, not a teenager yet. http://www.thefreedictionary.com/_/dict.aspx?word=tween

So hot and arousing !! Please add some details to brother and sister and lets see how far their sex together will go. A new chapter possibly about how " little brother " bangs his sister " and gives her what she needs like clock work. She just loves his big cock and cum and vicsa - versa !!

Thank you.

Published earlier as Tequila Sunrise

HOT ,dirty and perfect for a quick release!!

Is a worthless whore

Just noticed this and it is not ll that important but to the anonymous about the meaning of tween that is the modern/common use of the word but J.R.R. Tolkien used the term "tween" in The Lord of the Rings in reference to hobbits between the age of 20 and 30. In any search engine type "tween Tolkien" to find several references (or read Fellowship of the Ring)