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All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise'

by nightstalker1960

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
What?

Who the hell is Kathy?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Yummy!

Couple of Brats!

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
Some good, WTF??/ Kathy or Karen

Didn't you check the name of the women

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Who TF is Kathy?

Karen or Kathy?? A little simple editing, yo?!

prop69prop69almost 9 years ago
who is kathy

didn't anyone check names

homerjayhomerjayalmost 9 years ago
loved it

need more stories where husband/wife swap with parents. thanks.

timlaudertimlauderalmost 9 years ago
Wow

What a bunch of whores! LOL!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Not an incest story fan

But really enjoyed this. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Needs Editing and some Expansion

As the other feedback states, the daughter's name changes midway through the story and the daughter's behaviour shifts radically from outrage to playing with her father. Expansion or a second chapter from the father's point of view is needed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
daughter?

Is the daughter's name Karen or Kathy?

vstarmpvstarmpover 11 years ago
What about the other half?

A story about the birthday from the father-in-law's point of view would be a good sequel.

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