All Comments on 'Bisexual Camping Adventures Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very well written! Depiction of the 2 young men as they are overcoming social norms is outstanding

I could teach either of the 2 young men a thing or two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
And?

The story was good, as a tease. When is the next chapter coming? You spent all that time setting up for them to give into their curiosity, and then nothing.

Good imagery and all, just incomplete.

mike3820mike3820over 15 years ago
when's the next chapter?

I want to know what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good start!

Very good start on a new series, looking forward to seeing what happens after they get wasted at the pub ;)

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