All Comments on 'Bittersweet Ch. 02'

There are going to be more ups and downs in his life, than on a top class roller coaster. Thanks for the story....Rich

Loved reading this story. You should continue writing this story & post another chapter soon.

I love reading this story. You should write another chapter at least to give it a proper ending. It is too good to leave as is.

this needs a good editor or you need a dictionary EXCEPT instead of ACCEPT i may have flunked english even i know the difference

he should have left in chapter one after their date while he had the chance now he has a lifetime of a bitch bossy cousin to put up with

Needs another chapter how are they going to get through this please..

Needs another chapter how are they going to get through this please..

Need some spellchecking but really god storyline and feeling's, I hope they keep together because there's nothing sweeter than thru love and dame the society and the stupide morals. In many states and countries in the educated world first cousin can marry and get children....

I personally don't like when siblings get together like a couple, but if it's love and they can get health children then it should be there decision if they live in a true Democratic free country and not some backwater dark ages country.

Despite all the spelling mistakes, skipped words and grammatical errors, I really enjoyed this story. I loved the way you described their sex scene with such love and romance. So many stories on this site all about a quick fuck, it makes a refreshing change to read a true love story. Get yourself an editor and keep at it.

Lurn too spel