All Comments on 'Black and White'

Well written & exciting. I can't wait to read thevrest of the story. A worthy addition to the genre.

I enjoyed the story alot. I hope that you will write in a way that those of us not into the game will understand everything b/c you don't assume the reader knows stuff. I'd like to know more about the war and the lich king and the groups fighting. What specifically happened to seperate them and how was she raised? What is that process? Maybe a flashback would be good to fill in some blanks. Overall, I liked the story and think you do a great job of describing things. You allow a picture to be drawn with your words and that is important to me as a reader. It was well-written also. Keep writing!

Good writing, love the plot and characters. This story is heartwarming, full of unconditional love. I would like to see more of this couple, and not just erotic scenes.

Nothing short of excellent.