All Comments on 'Black and White Ch. 04'

So's this story

I'M SO IMPATIENT FOR YOU TO FINISH YOUR EXAMS!!! Don't leave me hanging like this!!! I knew the two angels would face each other in this episode! Question: If they were lovers before, why did Black and White stare at each other in complete rage? So many questions, so little time... Please complete this story soon!!!

Will someone please bribe Sky's course instructor so that he doesn't have to take the exam? That way he can get back to writing sooner.... ;-)

That ending was ridiculous! Arg! I need to see more! Can't wait till you update again :D

This is a very good story; however, I think an editor would be helpful to fix some errors. When I'm reading the story, I can't help but think that maybe English isn't your first language, although you write very well.