All Comments on 'Black Heels'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Please Proofread

Not a bad story - not as much focus on heels as I would have liked - But please, please, please: Check your spelling before submitting a story - "Heals" is something a doctor does, not what a woman wears!!! I wish I had a dollar for every time I've read a story on this site and the author has misspelled 'heels'. (Please forgive my rant. This was not directed at you alone.) I hope you write again and spice up the action in your next story.

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