All Comments on 'Black Magic Man'

I love "whodunit" stories - Jake is a monster hunter that is very interesting.

The tone of the story starts as being very laid back. Boy, it changes to a story that I am finding that I need an update as soon as possible. I want to know about the rape victims' situation and the who/why regarding the suspect.

Such a sexy familiar. I love cats!!! Kelly is a bobcat, how sexy is that!!!!

vt

A male witch in a college town w/a mysterious history. An adviser who might be a "guardian", but never actually said so. A police officer who sees an advantage to having a witch to pull into cases, although the sheriff isn't to fond of him. A hot girl who watches him swim and ends up being a shapeshifter/lynx who is now his "familiar". Add to that a couple of current mysteries. And you want to know if this story might be good? I say yes!

So I'll now be watching for chapter 2 of this story as well as the next in the Bark series.

Forgive me for saying this if you take offense, but I'd say that this is like a mix of Buffy, and The Dresden Files, with a little erotica thrown in. Which is, needless to say, a good thing. You've definitely made the concept your own, this was an entertaining read. I look forward to the next part.

beginning!! Keep the chapters coming!!!!

CG, this is a really good start to a new series, I am a Bark at the Moon fan and now a Black Magic Man fan. I hope you continue...

I very much enjoyed this and I hope that you'll keep writing! I want to see what happens with Jake and Kelly. I'm sure I'm not the only one.

Please write more! :)

dont keep us waiting too long for more

Stephen J

Really good story, I hope you upload another chapter of it soon.

This story was really well put together. Please write another soon!

great story when are going to do chapter 3?

I find a story I could seriously get into and the author drops off the face of Literotica before finishing it. 'sigh' Either way, great story and I seriously enjoyed concept.

Exactly give us more. I want to find out what happens next.