All Comments on 'Black Magick Ch. 02'

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BaribrotherBaribrotheralmost 18 years ago
WOW

Those two stories were GREAT. I couldn't pull myself away from them. And let me tell you, I got done working a 13 hour shift, and have been awake for 18 hours. I am so tired, yet I couldn't stop reading. After the first one, I just had to read the next. Really great stuff.

Please keep it going. And thanks for the great Story.

DarkAngelJLDarkAngelJLalmost 18 years ago
Keep It coming

I can't wait for the next chapt. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Just so you know, it's physiologically impossible for a man to pee when he's hard. Same goes for the need to pee - one doesn't feel it, unless he's at least a little soft.

The story is good tho!

WargamerWargamerabout 3 years ago

He is like a young wimpy teenage emptyhead.

He needs medical help with his chronic masturbating. He is one of the most pathetic characters l have seen in these pages, nothing to recommend about him at all. He does not fit with how any 19 year old would act

I hope his character improves somewhat before I lose patience and ditch this story

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