All Comments on 'Blackmail in the Pacific Ch. 07'

by Stillathisrequest

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
mydarknessmydarknessalmost 10 years ago

I have enjoyed your series. Please keep writing more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Omg! This is such a good story! You have to finish it. We need to know how it turns out. So many characters and so little time...😉

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
At last!!!

Been waiting for this for ages - It didn't disappoint. Thank you :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
BREATHTAKING LITERALLY

PLEASE WRITE MORE OMG....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Amazing!

I only stumbled on your stories a couple of days ago and have become fully involved, please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Best so fat

This chapter is definately the best so far. The combination of sara's need and Lucas's power and overwhelming need for her is great. Its such a great turning point in Sara's action showing her submissive nature rather than internal dialogue. Contine on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Changing the story frame

If the story framed was changed, and from sexual one was going to a rich-poor people, it will be a very good example of society's lack of good social care system.

So, a poor human being, is used by rich people with power that she gave, her consent, not by willing to be with such people, but because the ychosen her, by blackmail.

A social system that provokes "Whatever I want, I will take it, I dont care how many lives I will ruin" to a system of "caring about every soul on that planet, in good will" has a great distance. We can see it in human history such examples!

Nice story dear. Bravo! Well - written

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous