All Comments on 'Blackmailed Ch. 02'

STOP SAYING "SUCH THAT" IN EVERY PARAGRAPH

it would be a worth-while story if not for that annoying transition everywhere

Of Joey! I have read most of your stories, this is the first time that I comment. While other Joey stories have him as a Good boy and this one has him blackmailing ,’I wish somehow they were all related ! Just my opinion but what do I know :-)!

While your stories are riddled with grammar and wrong word errors, it Did not Distract Me too much from the story.

Great Stories!!!!

"Oh yes baby, but we must be discrete with this we don't want anybody finding about us Joey." Zilpha explained to her young lover."

Hard to be discrete when you are screaming in the office:

"Ooooooooohhhhhhhhhh...........Zilphaaaaaa..." Joey screamed as Zilpha licked the bulb shaped head of his penis."

You may wish to try better word choice in future.