All Comments on 'Blaine and Trey - Week 02'

this is looking real good

I'm intrigued by the two characters. I hope you will develop them more in the coming chapter. I like a bit of mystery, but for them to keep seeing each other and not learn what their pasts is going to prevent the story from moving forward. I really want to know what makes these two tick and what is stopping them from getting closer/involved.

Just enough teasing to make us wonder about Blaine's past. Looking forward to more.

I'm really enjoying your story and looking forward to reading week 03 :-)

So glad you added aother chapter so quickly. This is a great story so far. Keep it up!! :o)

Can't wait to see more! :) I really like Blaine.

I appreciate the feedback I've received and wanted to let you know that I am with you on the length. However, this was the first story I submitted and each section I wrote (for the first few sections) were 3 or more pages on word document. The final few sections were 7-8 pages on word document. Not knowing how that would translate to the format here, I submitted each week as a separate chapter. Now I know that I probably should have submitted the entire story in one part, because individually they aren't that long in this format. I am keeping that in mind for any future stories I write, and it really puts some perspective on some of my favorite stories in here... they must actually be full length novels.

One-page, multi-chapter stories drive me CRAZY.

Loving this wish the chapters were a tad longer though.

Caption covers all.

Okay. I said to take your time, and you should, but I'm going nuts! I really like this and can't wait for more.