by dejectedgeek
Great job! I loved it--an honesty and innocence that made me care for the characters. Actually one of the best I have ever read. Thank you.
Just kept waiting for the part where you tell us, that was 20 years ago and we are still together!!!!
That has to be the best erotic story I've ever read!!! I hope my first time is like that!!! It was just perfect.
I love eating pussy. the way you described the pussy eating was exceptional. this is What I would call story telling
Wonderful, wonderful story which encompasses every inexperienced, insecure guy's dream of getting his cock in a young lady's mouth and pussy for the first time. The contrast between my thoughts that Brenda might be a hooker hired by Steve or a virgin with innate sexual talents equal to Nick's kept me on the edge throughout. Having experienced isolated portions of Brenda's character in different women, the whole package left me breathless. Thanks!
u should right part 2 for. And this story is wonder full. My score 5 on 5
A dorm with a unisex bathroom, including showers? Where does this take place? Hard to believe the guy’s feeling love after knowing her for about an hour.
Wonderful romantic story, with appealing characters and a story line that never slacks for a moment.