All Comments on 'Blind Man's Bluff Ch. 01'

I write stories, too. And I hear from these people with comments about present or past tense. You have a guy complaining about your language. I never noticed anything that bothered him when I read it. Some people just like to complain. I'd say, pay attention to what these gripers say but don't let it bother you too much. They'd probably find fault with Hemingway.

Very nice little smutty story, Evil. I don't know, I kinda like when you say "box" and "humping".

Hey ainu,

I think "got no clue" <veg> wouldn't unstand a single word of Hemingway, even if he knew who this is

The phrasing sounded to my ears like something a college kid would say. At least at the university where I got my degree.

Maybe ("get a clue") went to some snobby ass college where developing the proper accent was more important than learning.

Keep up the great work!

Now I'm off to read more of your stories.

I always enjoy reading about people simply having good fun with their lives. These kids are doing it.

BTW: the Hubble telescope reference (to eyeglass lenses) is a nice one, but unfortunately all the major optical elements of the telescope are mirrors.