by wanderingmindgames
This is why I come to this site. You are awesome!
She's in trouble! The best fucking trouble ever! Go Melody
So wonderful to read writing of this caliber by someone who truly understands that D/s doesn't have to be about disdain and humiliation. Fifty stars.
You are an excellent writer! Keep going! I really enjoyed your story, both in content and in the telling of it. -Karen
Hope the fictitious marketing team beats the crap outta the real marketing team. Happy Period? Happy Period? Just pisses me off! Go get me tiger!
Ah yes the story, loved every second. Hotly erotic, right amount of tension, likeable people in all ways. I liked the spontaneous tears in the elevator. I liked the way Malcom seemed to know instinctively what prompted them, even if that might be "hopeful to the point of absurdity" that a man would understand.
Excellent story! More more more.
Great, erotic start. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Interesting start, love the characters! Looking forward to the next chapter.
This was very erotic and extremely arousing. I love the writing, it flows very well. Excitedly looking forward to the next chapter!