All Comments on 'Bliss Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Mischief, Such Sweet Seduction

Another excellent effort on your part once more! You continue the story within a story deftly, subtly interweaving the growth of Bliss along with a tantalizingly delicious sub-story of Mischief and her perfect seduction. I am personally growing fond of Mischief, as more of her fun, evil personality comes to the fore. Perhaps a side-story of her own in the near future?

Appreciate all the effort you have been putting in and hope there is more to come!

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