by clairelovescock
Good premise.
But overly rushed.
Needed many more details. And a lot of slowing down.
Sex was sex, but lacked eroticism.
Three stars.
Why are men having casual sex just man having casual sex? But women who do are always assigned the derogatory term 'sluts'? Not a bad story anyway, just wondering why so many writers do that. Tx
Nicely done. A thoroughly good job. Nothing like a blow job outside in the sun and somewhat in public. I've often dreamed of such. Love the cum slut angle. It is such a turn-on that she enjoys it even more than David. I can see her giving him blowjobs in a variety of places, some public, some not so public. Hope you write some of them.
from a woman who clearly loves to please orally...i identify with her from both ends of that nice cock !
You sure are a nasty sucking slut!! Great story, so real.
Perfect description of a wonderful blowjob from someone who obviously enjoys the experience. Nicely done!
Thanks for a great story. As I was reading it I imagined I was you. You describe the scene amazingly.
This story works for us girls too. My pussy is wet and my hubby will be getting a gift tonight! Thanks for a great story!
I hope David is good and attentive to her, too.
Why not sleep in same bed? They're both missing out on snuggles.
Thanks, I love good blowjob stories, especially from people who really like to give them. I was hard the whole time. Please don't wait so long to publish again.
Your latest story is a perfect example of something this Literotica reader enjoys immensely: quality BJ stories.
If there is even the tiniest flaw herein I cannot find it.
Thank you so much.
Just the right kind of story: short, to the point, and erotic. Had me hard within the first couple of sentences.
Well written too! There is NOTHING like a cute, eager girl who LOVES to suck cock. It makes a big difference when the girl just sucks because her boyfriend wants it or REALLY LOVES being a girl and doing what only girls can do best...submitting. YOU, Claire, are the epitome of femininity!