All Comments on 'Blowjob in the Car'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I'm Envious

That particular story has been one of my fantasies. Unfortunately, my wife has never been keen on the idea of giving me a blow job while we're driving down the road. So, I'll just be envious of your good fortune and wish it was me in that car instead of you. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Expand your descriptions

You got a nice opening for the story, but the real fun lies in the act. The opening of the story, and the situation was good, but I would suggest a little more description. But the final act needs to a lot more description. For example, how did his cock look like? who did he feel when she sucked his cock etc. Give more decription and this story will be a winner.

See:

http://100strokes.blogspot.com

also see: http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Mary_Jorsay_Gandmar/

GizmorGizmorover 10 years ago
Mumbai

Enjoyed your story. Keep up the good work. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Endangering everyone around you.....for your selfish satisfaction

Not cool.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I have been a very lucky man in my life time and been given a blow job whle driving so I can relate to this story.Keep it up. The writing not the blow job;s---smile

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