by mayakaran28
That particular story has been one of my fantasies. Unfortunately, my wife has never been keen on the idea of giving me a blow job while we're driving down the road. So, I'll just be envious of your good fortune and wish it was me in that car instead of you. :-)
You got a nice opening for the story, but the real fun lies in the act. The opening of the story, and the situation was good, but I would suggest a little more description. But the final act needs to a lot more description. For example, how did his cock look like? who did he feel when she sucked his cock etc. Give more decription and this story will be a winner.
See:
http://100strokes.blogspot.com
also see: http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Mary_Jorsay_Gandmar/
Not cool.
I have been a very lucky man in my life time and been given a blow job whle driving so I can relate to this story.Keep it up. The writing not the blow job;s---smile