All Comments on 'Blue Ch. 03'

The suspense here is killing me! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love it! Seriously. Please don't make us wait to long for the next chapter. You have such a talent! Love your wirting style, it's so unique, there's just something about the way you form your sentences that allows the reader to fall in love with the characters.

The 2 viewpoints were neither confusing nor annoying. Well done indeed! Now I'm left wondering, just who is Thomas, & what carrier is linked with the mobile phone Blue was using? My mobile doesn't work in my own basement!

I just contracted heart in mouth disease... your writing has a lot to answer for :) ... On pins and needles, Ch 4 here I come.

stop mixing it up. it confusing.?

I know its been awhile since you've posted but I found this chapter confusing. I did get the two points of views, but the sexual dream between the both seemed very unnessary to the plot. Too far reaching I guess, to share dreams okay but to have the cellphone somehow appear by that Gibs guy, who could be the cop?? seemed to far a stretch of belief for the story.

im still looking forward to reading next chapter