All Comments on 'Blue Christmas'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Mary X-mas afterall!

After a sad start it surely ended as a very sweet story. Keep it up please??!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Christ, isn't that trite; isn't is it old? So why am I crying?

The whore with the heart of gold. A story we have all read or heard: with scepticism or belief.....all I know is that I felt both their pain....been there, done that, got the scars....well written; well done; probably worse for the season....keep working, keep trying, keep entertaining those of us who can only read, not write.

AllosaurusRexAllosaurusRexover 13 years ago
Thank you

Do write a part two of this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More is Needed

I really enjoyed the story

1950oldracer1950oldracerover 13 years ago
Great Read

Very good read hope you follow on with this story, the story line should last some more...

Auld_HenryAuld_Henryover 13 years ago
In Bradford,

So close to the truth, It did have a very English feel, I wish I could give more at Christmas, There are too many lonely people. I enjoyed the whole story, I like the introduction, the scenerio, It keep me hooked until the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WOW

what luck, a whore for Christmas...

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