All Comments on 'Bobbie Says'

I've been reading from this site for a few years and

This has to be the BEST story! I've read

😁

The exposition in the beginning really created wonderful depth to the characters. The health issues that were discussed also made the story feel so real. Oh, and the sex is hot!

5 stars for the fine writing and for even referencing an Iron Butterfly tune! Yeah!

just a little too weird for me.

they meet, go home together, use scarves for bondage and play with toys?

how about getting to know each other first?

It only would have taken a paragraph or two to let the blind date end at midnight, the 2nd date be flirtatious, introducing the mention of the games & condition, the 3rd introducing the sex - build at least Some tension, & build the believability. Still, 4.

You are off to a great start! A little more attention to using the correct spelling and you'll be an author to contend with!! Keep up the good work! 4* story!

A perfectly imperfect pair "shuttered" denotes being closed

About them we learn to care "shuddered" is a physical reaction

She gives him fluff to stimuli.

Is it enough

For a cock that both of them share FYI,write on....

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