by Taverner
You created a good situation, described it very well and carried through on the path you set up to a good conclusion. Very well done and thanks for the entertainment.
This story was very well written. The relationship between Allan and Karla was beautiful. Keep it up!
Superb. Absolutely fantastic, sensual, heartfelt and warm. I rarely make any comments but this is written so well, I had to say something. Please continue.
Why this story doesn't have a red "H" by it I will never know!
This story was hot and well written! The premise and the way it was told was just superb!
Yes I would love a sequel! With the way this is written who wouldn't!
This was a very loving, sensual story
P.S. So will Allan have his vasectomy reversed, so they can start a family?
Thanks for writing!
Very good story but don't leave us hanging. What's next for these two...or maybe three?
don't remember seeing anything about a divorce swwms if she left with the little jerk he would want a divorce right away
i agree it needs more and krystal needs to get involved also
Just read this and your auntie story and have to say you are really talented. You're patient, have great pacing and your dialogue is the tits. Just so well done on every level. Thanks for taking the time to write some dick-hardening erotic.
Bob
Not really impressed with red H as per Sexmate's comments but bigawd I was impressed with this story.