by LustyLee77
more inane bullshit no doubt.
Who would even consider keeping a husband who wanted to go off with some bisexual slut??
What a joke, Bonnie should let Maria have the shithead if he wants to go and get on with a real life.
It really is that simple.
a story about lesbians. I read the story twice and didn't see one bit that was believable.
And the other comment about dumping the husband, why? He wasn't the one dining at the Y everyday. If she loved him, she would tell him what was happening.
Good story...a rough edge here or there will smooth out if you keep writing. Beware self-appointed critics whose true motives come gift-wrapped, disguised, labelled as "constructive criticism" or some type "housekeeping seal".
*constructive criticism never contains venom. Never.
Story was hot! Please don't stop there....let us know what is next. I was so hard reading this.
She's enjoying being the submissive toy of several lesbian and bisexual women. She also loves her husband. At this point blackmail should be less of an inducement than the prospoect of a gift for hubby. "Honey, I'm the submissive sextoy of several incredibly beautiful bisexual women. Would you like to meet them?"
Adultery is betrayel, not sex. Cybersex is adultery if it's concealed and deceitful. Orgies are not if they're open and honest.
Who the hell cares if this is not literarily sound. It's a sex story and that's all it is. Anyone wants fine lesbian literature, go read Sappho's poetry.
This is porn, and it's what everyone else comes here for.
Excellent stroy, LustyLee77, especially like it when our heroine was surprised that Ruth, a married woman pushing 50, was actually a lesbian. Kinky.
Oh God, I came three times just rerading the first part, I hope the rest will just as good
Had me close to orgasm and wanting to be in that position. Keep it up.
This story will bring out your inner lesbian. The hot action made me hot and wet. I just had to CUM.