All Comments on 'Bonobos of Humanity'

by JMaxwell69

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Fantastic!

Imaginative, hot, and one of the most skillfully written submissions I've ever seen on Literotica. Very impressive!

IMcRoutIMcRoutabout 14 years ago
I agree!

I agree whole-heartedly with the 'fantastic' comment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Awesome!

This is one of the best stories I've read here. Well-written, a little slow at some parts, but you are a good writer! Keep it up and maybe try other areas as well?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Silly

I wonder what they would have done if he had failed their inspection? Killed him, and waited for the gods to send them another candidate?

vikster89vikster89about 9 years ago
Fantastic!

Brilliantly written! Loved it...although I wished Yui had stayed or fell in love with the Dr . You could see it build up throughout but then they suddenly had to go back to a normal relationship. Other than that it was fantastically written!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I think this was fantastic. More please. Really enjoyed it.

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