All Comments on 'Bookworm'

by John OConnor

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
sensitive and thooughtful

A sensitive, thoughtful tale of the blossoming of a lovely, shy girl at the hands of her gentle lover.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Wow... just, wow!

This was one of the most beautifully written stories that I've read in a long time. I loved the whole thing. Great work :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
that was very sweet

i have read a many sex story in my day but never one so sweet it almost made me cry i hope that you will continue to write these wonderful loving stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
nice work!

Great story! Loved it.

RumourRumourover 19 years ago
Breathtaking....

beautiful....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Lovely story

A charming love story with realistic lesbian characters. The erotic fulfillment is hot, but there is so much more for the reader who wants to care about the lovers and their story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Why Isn't There More Of This?

A sweet romance, *very* hot sex, and actual characters. What's not to love? May Megan and Alexus spend a very happy and hot life together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
This is quality!

Very sensitive, very erotic, very loving. This was a very refreshing story to find on this site. Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

one of the best

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love it!

One of the best I've ever read.

Wish I had a Megan in my life.

candymamacandymamaover 12 years ago
damn

megan has sum major patience sweet

KirotoKirotoabout 12 years ago
Sweet Love

Awwww, I love how their personalities clash and how they both take their time with each other to build up that heat. =3 No pretenses, no cheating, just two who need to get over their fears. ^^ Cuteness. ^^ Love the ending. =3

Qui3t0n3Qui3t0n3over 11 years ago
That is wit

Out a doubt some good shit to 4 real keep doin ya thing

ameririshameririshalmost 10 years ago

Fantastic story. Sweet and sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Too much information

Too much unneeded information I was so bored I did not even finish page one your not writing a movie just a short story.

Maddie624Maddie624almost 4 years ago

I think that this is the best "first-time" story that I have ever read...period. Lesbian, straight and/or anything in between. I doubt that the author of this story will ever read this because it has been so long, but I needed to comment on it because of how well it was written. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

derek33derek33over 2 years ago

Really really good! Very well written! (If I would change anything, I would have added more tit-play... but this is still a 5 star!)

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