by John OConnor
A sensitive, thoughtful tale of the blossoming of a lovely, shy girl at the hands of her gentle lover.
This was one of the most beautifully written stories that I've read in a long time. I loved the whole thing. Great work :)
i have read a many sex story in my day but never one so sweet it almost made me cry i hope that you will continue to write these wonderful loving stories
A charming love story with realistic lesbian characters. The erotic fulfillment is hot, but there is so much more for the reader who wants to care about the lovers and their story.
A sweet romance, *very* hot sex, and actual characters. What's not to love? May Megan and Alexus spend a very happy and hot life together.
Very sensitive, very erotic, very loving. This was a very refreshing story to find on this site. Keep up the great work!
Awwww, I love how their personalities clash and how they both take their time with each other to build up that heat. =3 No pretenses, no cheating, just two who need to get over their fears. ^^ Cuteness. ^^ Love the ending. =3
Too much unneeded information I was so bored I did not even finish page one your not writing a movie just a short story.
I think that this is the best "first-time" story that I have ever read...period. Lesbian, straight and/or anything in between. I doubt that the author of this story will ever read this because it has been so long, but I needed to comment on it because of how well it was written. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
Really really good! Very well written! (If I would change anything, I would have added more tit-play... but this is still a 5 star!)