All Comments on 'Boot Camp Blues'

by deputy duffy

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El FoloEl Foloover 12 years ago
Well...

This is a scenario that I absolutely love. It was a bit light on action, I'm sad we only got it in little bits and pieces, though you have a great style that makes it work as a sort of mini-mystery...still, the heart wants what it wants, right?

Anyway, good shit. If you ever decide to write more in depth about what happened here, I'll read the fuck out of that shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A+

A truely refreshing read amongst alot of predicable repeats.

thomas_deanthomas_deanalmost 6 years ago
THE PAST RETURNS TO HAUNT YOU

An innocent prank goes awry sending a number of young ladies for the correction of an austere boot camp where they're subjected to a series of humiliations. It would have been all forgotten except that a letter never mailed surfaces which records the entire experience. Like Deputy's Mental Hospital Horror, the erotic elements support the story line and present a vivid image of something that could have happened to someone.

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