All Comments on 'Borrower'

by Ashson

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lance_spearmanlance_spearmanalmost 10 years ago
Cute story

There is another one very similar somewhere on the site, but I can't for the life of me remember either the title or the author. Something about someone having a bad day, but the end making the day worthwhile.

BriteaseBriteasealmost 10 years ago
Amusing!

My neighbor borrowed my car the other day. I wonder if that counts?

EspressoBolusEspressoBolusalmost 10 years ago
good one

Clever and intriguing.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 10 years ago
Cute ... Ashson in a more consensual mode

A really cute Ashson flash tale. Much more (unambiguously) consensual than is typical Ashson. Hopeful no cries of 'Rape!' with this one. Sounds like Sweetie will be looking forward to being a loaner in less hurried future circumstances.

Britease ... did you check your car's tailpipe when your car was returned?

5*

dinkymacdinkymacalmost 10 years ago
Good one!

Thanks for sharing.

magicj69magicj69almost 10 years ago
this is great!

love the idea

anyone have a wife i can borrow?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
This is a good example of why I open LW stories

I guess I'm one of those people some ask "why do you open these stories?" I open these hoping to find something new, something original, something that shows the writer spent some time. This was all of those, a simple story but one that's not the same old, same old. Very good.

impo_58impo_58almost 10 years ago
Just for laughing...

This story is a long joke, for laugh...nothing more

OctoposseOctopossealmost 10 years ago

I really liked it - funny, sexy, and well written. Great stuff!

tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
I GUESS THE OLD ADAGE

neither a borrower or a lender be will not be used here, TK U MLJ LV NV

funtungnfrogfuntungnfrogalmost 10 years ago
Fun to borrow

That was a well compensated perspective on borrowing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Someone can borrow my wife

I loved it. Thank you. If anyone wants to borrow my wife they can too :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Clever, Cute, Sophisticated!

A fun tale; thank you for writing it. Husband George borrowed the BBQ. However, neighbor got the fresh meat! Delightful story!

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 10 years ago
Nice

Not what I expected. I never expect these tales to be funny unless it's in the Humor category. I was pleasantly surprised. Great flash tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Ashton,

Can I borrow your brain.

It's obviously brand new and never been used.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
SAD...

Seems like taking advantage of a mentally challenged woman....drunk would be better...this is just sad.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Dagwood Might Try This to Stop Herb's Borrowing

It's refreshing to find clever humor in an erotic story.

Design82Design82almost 10 years ago

Another GREAT story!!

However that fact does carry a small problem............I'm now gonna have to read ALL your stories.......and it isn't as though I have a lot of free time just sitting around!!

Honestly, some people have absolutely no consideration..........

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 8 years ago
How did I miss this little minor classic ?

Ashson's narrators are the Dukes of Droll. I echo all previous compliments in all comments before and after this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
LOL

This was a great little gem!!!

ErotFanErotFanover 7 years ago
Bon Homme Richard was full of it

I once read there; "Neither a borrower nor a lender be." -- BAH!

Surely there are other adventures involving neighborly doings.

amischiefmakeramischiefmakerover 7 years ago
Cute -- really cute

and entertaining. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
WORKED FOR ME...

I frequently borrowed the wife of our downstairs neighbor when he did his long haul truck runs. That girl was small so she'd go nuts when I had all nine and a half inches buried in her pussy and started fucking her. She said his was just shy of six inches so she couldn't wait for him to leave on his next run. Three years she came up to spend the night with me filling and fucking her and he never had a clue.

So I liked this five star story. It reminded me of Pauline, way back when.

Rifraff123Rifraff123about 3 years ago

We should all share!

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